Revising 👀!!

Well this week has been a very stressful week for me due to SAT and all the tests I had, but the group and I were able to make some revisions to our storyboard based on our meetings and ideas. Remember our ideas and scenes are always prone to changes, so if you guys have any suggestions just leave a comment and i'll be sure to look at it.

Here are pictures of our revised storyboard:

As you guys can see during this scene we decided to be more specific with some of the shots, such as:
- Cemetery scene will be shot at Markham park
- The names will be shown (headstones)
- The transition used will be flashy (black to          white or other way around)
- This is a FLASHBACK (beginning of movie is the end)



On this page, we just added more detail to the scenes, for example:
- The clock sound will be made through Foley to enhance the sound
- The close up of the water faucet will be made through Foley as well
- When the knob shakes we will here it as well
- The red arrows show that all those shots will be cuts (no transitions)                                                                                                                             
This last page included some scenes that we added a little more detail too, such as:
- We added a square around the paper to show where to zoom
- We added emotion/ action to show frustration
- We showed a possible symbol that might be shown (still deciding)


One of the aspects that we are looking on improving next is too make dialogue for the scenes, although we are planning on having a silent movie to reinforce the fact of thriller vibe, there will be some dialogue.


I was reading an article (click here to learn more about it) based on the creation of storyboards and this quote really stood out to me and thought that I should tell you guys because it is exactly what we are trying to do

"But remember, a long journey begins with a single step, so begin by breaking the screenplay down into small steps, or shots."

I decided to show this because it shows how this is all a process and it has to be broken down step by step. This is why we first made the storyboard, now we revised it and made it with more detail, and then the next time we will add more information because the storyboard is the film and if done correctly will determine the outcome of it.


Sources:
Storyboarding Your Film. (n.d.). Retrieved from https://www.dummies.com/art-center/performing-arts/filmmaking/storyboarding-your-film/